Comments for T.A. White https://tawhiteauthor.com/ Fantasy & Science Fiction Author Sun, 18 Feb 2024 11:47:58 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.4.3 Comment on Announcement by Dragon https://tawhiteauthor.com/announcement/#comment-271 Sun, 18 Feb 2024 11:47:58 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3769#comment-271 There is the potential there for a further 5 books following Kiras’ progress through the ‘next phase’. Will this be done or are you leaving her at the cliffs edge?

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Comment on It’s out! by Magda https://tawhiteauthor.com/its-out/#comment-270 Fri, 09 Feb 2024 12:45:31 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3763#comment-270 Just a quick thank you. The firebird books are my go to book to relax and move to a chill space. I have listen to them sooo many times. I am grateful.

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Comment on Treading Water by Linda https://tawhiteauthor.com/treading-water/#comment-269 Wed, 07 Feb 2024 16:14:29 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3773#comment-269 When was the last time you read Charge of the Light Brigade? Let it stir your emotions and then let your emotions stir Aileen’s. Recall that her world is real instead of a book and a job. It will come. Creation is costly but you always pay and we thank you.

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Comment on Announcement by Shannon https://tawhiteauthor.com/announcement/#comment-268 Tue, 06 Feb 2024 21:35:40 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3769#comment-268 In reply to Snow.

Cloud Library gave me the estimated “coming soon” date for the audiobook as being 6/11/24.

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Comment on Treading Water by WM https://tawhiteauthor.com/treading-water/#comment-267 Fri, 02 Feb 2024 18:00:44 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3773#comment-267 In reply to MK.

Yes, karaoke with Nathan serenading her with “Come on Aileen” then using that line throughout the story when he wants her to something.

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Comment on Treading Water by Andrea Smith https://tawhiteauthor.com/treading-water/#comment-266 Thu, 01 Feb 2024 01:35:30 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3773#comment-266 Why are they where they are? My crazy brain: They came for the chocolate; the beautiful bridge is a portal to Candyland! 

Something Bigger? I’m seeing a s’more-style monster get eaten by Aileen. Lol!

I hope the brainstorming session makes you write like the wind. At the very least, it gets you moving in the right direction.

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Comment on Treading Water by Alanna https://tawhiteauthor.com/treading-water/#comment-265 Wed, 31 Jan 2024 02:54:25 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3773#comment-265 I recommend some exercise that you can’t speak through. Laps in a pool, or distance running. Something where you are alone with the aches. Start with your question, and eventually the answer will come. Best of luck, and we’re rooting for you.

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Comment on Treading Water by Tink https://tawhiteauthor.com/treading-water/#comment-264 Tue, 30 Jan 2024 02:03:39 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3773#comment-264 Happy wording.]]> Got to be explicit in your requests and typing. Former could lead to flashes of hot and latter could lead to flashes of perspiration. 😋

Happy wording.

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Comment on Treading Water by Betsy Stout Shaver https://tawhiteauthor.com/treading-water/#comment-263 Mon, 29 Jan 2024 21:27:54 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3773#comment-263 Sometimes creative blocks happen because the subconscious part of the creative flow gets plugged up. Two or more trains of thought are tangled and competing as to which should be best to be next in order. Maybe take some centering time to relax and try out different scenarios for the story to flow or rearrange itself. Maybe there is an important new element that needs to be included. Take some contemplative time to let your thoughts come out and play.

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Comment on Treading Water by MK https://tawhiteauthor.com/treading-water/#comment-262 Mon, 29 Jan 2024 21:27:10 +0000 https://tawhiteauthor.com/?p=3773#comment-262 All I ask is that there are more karaoke scenes. I feel strongly that Aileen needs to teach Connor the fine art of lip-syncing to the greatest hits. Or introduce him to The Office. Hehehehe

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